I saw this in a couple at a wine bar one night, and it formed a haiku, almost independent of me.
observed in the bar
her lipstick marked the wine glass
his tight grip marked her
I saw this in a couple at a wine bar one night, and it formed a haiku, almost independent of me.
observed in the bar
her lipstick marked the wine glass
his tight grip marked her
Isn’t it great when they practically write themselves
Yes! It went from the observation to the Notes app on my iPhone in about ten seconds, months ago, and I forgot about it til I was retrieving something else. There are quite a few more little self-written, in-the-moment haiku in the drawer, still to come. 🙂